Hey, my English class. My christmas holiday was fun. i got to spend time with the whole side of my dad's family. We ate alot of my grandma's country style meal and capped it off with sweet potatoe pie. i got to see my horse. I killed my second deer, which was a small buck. But, after all that i began to think about how i could do better in my classes grade wise.
I realized i need to stop procrastinating so much and just get the work done. I noticed because once you get behind its's hard to catch back up. i also need to study more. I made good on almost all of my test but could have done better, if I would have just tryed a little harder. I hope to accoplish my goal of just putting in tha extra effort.
Cody, it sounds like you had a relaxing break. I like how you connect your activities over break to thinking about the new semester. Please make sure that you proofread and use the conventions of standard English (like capitalizing "I" and the first word of each sentence) in these posts.
ReplyDeleteCody this is a great story and it sounds like you had fun and you were well fed. One of the mistakes that I noticed is that when you posted this your I's were not capitalized. Just make sure to work on that and get that done for next time.
ReplyDeleteCody good job man. I can tell that you had a great time with your family and different activities. I only noticed two mistakes in your paragraph.It seems that you forgot to capitolize your, "I". And you also put a comma instead of a period.
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Hey Cody, I liked your blog but you could maybe work on spelling a little bit more. Also, the organization could use a little work. Overall it was a great blog.
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